Rachel lay in the darkness of her bedroom, staring wide-eyed at the shadows on the ceiling. She was very glad for the night-light casting a soft yellow glow from its tiny imitation sun. It let her see the shadows so much more clearly.
When she came home, she had a lot of questions. She'd tried asking Mommy the first couple of questions, but Mommy didn't seem to know, and started crying, and said Rachel shouldn't talk about things like that. Mommy said that Rachel should forget it all, and just be happy and normal and a good little girl.
Raising her hands slowly, Rachel made sinuous gestures with her arms, things that felt right, but clumsy,
Rachel lay in the darkness of her bedroom, staring wide-eyed at the shadows on the ceiling. She was very glad for the night-light casting a soft yellow glow from its tiny imitation sun. It let her see the shadows so much more clearly.
When she came home, she had a lot of questions. She'd tried asking Mommy the first couple of questions, but Mommy didn't seem to know, and started crying, and said Rachel shouldn't talk about things like that. Mommy said that Rachel should forget it all, and just be happy and normal and a good little girl.
Raising her hands slowly, Rachel made sinuous gestures with her arms, things that felt right, but clumsy,
almost a month later, and not much to show for it. still working on it, though. fortunately, I think I'm about through the sticky part, and should be into more actiony stuff that'll be easier to write now. unfortunately, I'm pretty sure I'm going to have to completely rewrite a good 2k words that I was quite happy with. that's what I get for writing bits of the story out before I get to them...
1239 today, plus a bunch yesterday--still not up to my 2k a day goal, but much closer. and just for the hell of it I added all the words so far up: 38,000+. DAAAAAAAAMN. doing this has been so good for me, in so many ways. :D
pushed past another block today, and ended up with a total of 737 new words on the actual story! I feel like I'm starting to hit my stride again, which is lovely. ideally I'd be writing at least 2000 words daily; I've done it before, and I need to be doing that much if I'm going to get through the rest of this story by the end of the month. and now I think I've figured out how to push myself in a good way. we'll see how well it holds up--fingers crossed! (except of course that I need to use them to type)